Cahtlene_Vassallo

The story is good but the grammar is really bad. Past tense used instead of present and vice versa. Mixes singular with plural. The first chapters had better grammar.

what the world are you talking about? reapeted chapters, chapters from other books. Dont you do some editing?

his sister not her sister

its not fair that the writer did not finish the story.

Are the characters changing their names?

the plot is turning out to be more interesting and good

a very curious plot. Are the prince and Louisa sibblings or cousins?