Ratmor

Honestly I think that fully ai writing is cringe as hell bcs people often use it for soulles husk of a bullcrap, but sometimes it can be good if it's just a helper not a core of the whole fic

You have sex and you have elves, of course you will have attention! You could also share it on spacebattles minus sex scenes I guess, I think they have some weird rules but I'm not sure, but it's a good place for feedback. I'm also an author but I translate my stuff from other language, maybe you're also not natvie and/or use the suggestions of some correction programs? Or are you actually using some ai for help, ugh it doesn't actually look like it much, but I have to ask, because the plot doesn't look like ai and the actual emotional filling is there as well.

You post on ao3 as well, no?

This is good, recommend reading it 9.5/10 my personal rating for sure. Idk about ai assistance people are talking about, the story is filled with appropriate feelings and coherent enough to touch you, so yes, do not be afraid and dive in, people

Is it off?

I think they're having sexual relationship for chapters already but author decided to skip the sauce

It's not quite clear, does Syl keep wearing acheron ring or not?

Bagag

If I won't write it while it's still in my head it won't be written 😂

Thank you for the review! I'm currently writing this story because my sister dared me to, as we argued about aboverse. I'm currently on sabbatical from work, so I got too much time on my hands and we spent too much time in one house. Smut is mostly for those horny moments, not the main point of it all. It's not machine translation, if mtl is what it means though. I actually wanted to write this in some known bl world but then cringed so hard that just made the whole thing up on the fly. Still not sure about details yet, as it was the spur of the moment. But I will try to update at least twice a week.