Jessika_vocals
Hey! Welcome to be a part of my inspiration. ❤️ I'm Jessica_Vocals. A young girl who's chasing her dreams to be heard by the world through writing. 🦋 I belive we can do this together, my loves! 😘 🤗
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Heyyy, Author!! Take all my powers tones, I mean, take everything! This story is a ballistic one, right from the cover and its title. OMG! I was awed. So, I decided to give a read. Interestingly, the characters and grammatical syntax are superseded my expectations. A take from me: Flesh out the MC, Ebuka's action and descriptions around him using the : "show don't tell" device. The elaboration on certain words, should be moderate, but then, talk more about actions! Not showing us. Asides this, it's a five stars from me! Keep writing, dear Author.
Ouu! What powers is that? Will I get them too? [img=thinking]
Hmm. Interesting![img=nervous]
It's my first time! I need your reviews to set as a map if I'm improving or vise-versa. How is the exposition between The MC and other round characters? Who is your favourite character? What story twists makes you wanna scream and develop cold feet?? 😂 And MOST IMPORTANTLY , in what ways do you suggest I improve?
OMG! 🙄 She's giving her book a 5 stars! This Author is so ridiculous! A Five stars? She's really high and needs to be sued! Yes! This is what I get when I decided to chase passion. Interestingly, "A Bride for The Vampires" is my First ever Novel, dedicated on Webnovel. Writing this wonderful masterpiece and putting in the sweat and toils, is a BIG WIN for me, and also to others : that you CAN do anything you SET your mind to! Now, wonderful readers, I need your views concerning this story.