So.... to start with the story was better than I thought considering the fact that it was your first work. I liked the story. As one of your readers I would like to give my views... > It was unique to give a detailed view of MC's previous life... (Since I don't recall many of the LN or WN providing something like that) > If you have provided a proper and a detailed note about each character since it does no have any visual to describe them (characters) > At certain places the pacing was a bit off but it was manageable That all Don't stop it in midway and keep it going I will be waiting for the next chapter....... 😊