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7476611677mthCommentedCh 40 A Sudden Development- 7476611677mthCommented
Could've done Incubus/Vampire instead of Ero Vampire, it sounds a bit dumb
Race: Ero-Vampire - 7476611677mthCommented
I am very much hoping that these are just rumors. I like the concept of this novel, but if Rena is actually like this then I'm going to drop it.
There was a rumour she would let you fuck her for a mere $10. - 7476611677mthCommented
I would divide the disciples into a bunch of different courts, since you can't go around giving ridiculous talent to everyone. Elders - Strong and trustworthy women who are qualified to teach. Master's Court - Sect Master's Women - ridiculous talent blessing. Upper Court - Trustworthy and strong vassals - lots of resources. Lower Court - Normal disciples/fodder - minimal resources. Maybe the lower two could have multiple levels.
Ch 44 A City into a Vassal? - 7476611677mthCommented
I feel like that's incredibly stupid, giving up their nobility for the sake of being subservient to Heavenly Harem Sect without even consulting him first or asking whether he is willing to take you on. If I was in Daniel's position I would keep the sect as a small but highly elite force.
Ch 43 A Vassal? - 7476611677mthCommented
You mean to tell me he is how old and doesn't understand that abusive parents exist?
"I never thought a parent like you could ever exist and don't tell me that you've done nothing wrong," Daniel said. - 7476611677mthCommented
Only question I have is, do the guys who are getting green hats deserve to be?
(This is an extremely overpowered Protagonist where the Main Concept is what the title of the novel sounds like, and it's a wish-fulfilment type of novel where there are Harem, Yandere, Milf and Netori). If you are not interested in amateurish work, pleasure turn the wheels around) - 7476611677mthCommented
that's a bit much, 7-9 is best. At a certain point extra inches becomes useless because it doesn't fit anyway.
Ye Chen's meat stick size was 11 inches and the size was almost the same as Zhao Yanyan's wrist. - 7476611677mthCommented
disgust?
Ye Chen concentrated the energy of his disgust on his palms, he then began massaging Master Lin Rouxi's thighs. - 7476611677mthCommented
porn is immoral
He connected to a neighbor's wifi and opened a porn site to watch some cultured video. - 7476611677mthCommented
What is the point of making this guy a reincarnator if it has no bearing on the story? Hate when people do that, it creates a disconnect between the protagonist and the life of the person they now inhabit and weakens any relationships or experiences they have.
This book has been deleted. - 7476611677mthCommented
that's the best you could come up with? what about "Bovine" instead
This book has been deleted. - 7476611678mthCommentedCh 29 29. Flame snake
- 7476611679mthCommentedCh 19 Preparation
- 7476611679mthCommentedCh 8 Chapter 8: Animus Overdrive
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Is this Erian? Why would you have him do this?
A male youth not older than 16 was running with all his might, expending most of his nuclear energy as a vein glowed crimson right next to his heart. - 7476611679mthCommented
What is the point of making this guy a transmigrator? This seems to happen a lot, authors make their characters transmigrators or whatever solely for the sake of it when there is no real reason for it. It's detrimental to both the character and the story as it creates a disconnect between the protagonist and both the life and emotions of the person they have inhabited as well as their new world.
Ch 1 Unknown World - 7476611679mthCommented
What is the point of making this guy a transmigrator? This seems to happen a lot, authors make their characters transmigrators or whatever solely for the sake of it when there is no real reason for it. It's detrimental to both the character and the story as it creates a disconnect between the protagonist and both the life and emotions of the person they have inhabited as well as their new world.
Ch 1 High-grade Defective Serum