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I love your story, but the surname Drakonar still feels like a kick in the balls, damn.

If we're talking about training, this Gohan trained for the same amount of time and under similar conditions to the original Gohan, who after his training was able to fight Perfect Cell, who was much more powerful than the androids. Therefore, it's logical to think that this Gohan has a very similar power level.

This isn't criticism, but it would have been a good plan if Goku returned from the Other World for a day, like he did in the Buu saga, and trained Gohan in the Hyperbolic Time Chamber instead of Master Roshi. That way, he could teach him the secret of Super Saiyan.

Seriously, I always wondered why Gohan didn't have the idea to go to Namek, or why Goku didn't contact him from there and give him the idea of the Hyperbolic Time Chamber so he could train.

Relax man, anyway we have guys like Higuruma who have an insane talent for sorcery, so it's not unreasonable to think that Shinji can't advance at the same pace, Jujutsu Kaisen is the world of rapid advancements and unfair powers.

One of the best things I've read, you honor Tolkien with your writing, keep writing and keep bringing joy to those of us who read your work.

I'm sorry, friend, I don't mean to sound critical, but that surname you came up with for the new Valyrian family is like a punch in the gut; I don't like it at all. But the rest is great.

It doesn't matter if you use AI, everyone who's bothered by it can go to hell, what matters is that the story is good, the plot is coherent, as are the characters, that's the least you can ask for.

I don't write reviews very often and I don't rate things either, but you clearly deserve that effort; your work is magnificent. I appreciate the effort you've put into this work and I sincerely hope you don't abandon it.

That's what I like to hear. Expecting genuine friendship from a high-class Saiyan is foolish. Vegeta's behavior was almost a miracle caused by Bulma's almost inhuman will and bad temper; rather, the exception that proves the rule.