EpochAST

Respect gang, hella cool what ur doing here

Hey author. I have to say the storyline of ur book is generally good. But there are definitely a few issues I have not with the story or the world, but the grammar. The grammar in this book is objectively bad. I’m sorry to say this but I have to. The sentences are choppy and incomplete. You tend to miss connecting words which are imperative to the sentence. Respectfully you can’t use “English is not my first language” as a shield for criticism. I suggest you use grammarly or even ai to refine your work so it becomes more legible and comfortable to read. Otherwise it’s a great book and my recommendation to read it still stands.

Honestly speaking it’s a very decent work, i would give it a 8/10. Would be higher if not for grammatical errors (yes i know it isn’t ur first language but still i got to say it). System is interesting and i like the concept of being able to copy literally anything. Overall I recommend you should read it

That’s a lot of ranks

This is PMO ngl

Foreshadowing MC integrating all three systems

It’s bs translation, just run with it. Dont think

I mean it’s easier and less annoying than saying qi-blood every time

Is that a spoiler or guess

Ye honestly pretty reasonable amount