Apathetic_Reviewer

Someone answer this man's important question!

Next time…know your place

Everything was great but the constant intervinig of the author, every chapter there has to be some irrelevant story that has nothing to do with the novel, i'm still annoyed at the whole recipe monologue Also there irreleavnt chapters involved that would announce something or would as us to decide basic things, as one point i assumed he was asking as to write the novel for him/her, but apart from that everything was great, the character personality, the side characters, the way he approached problem etc

Put romance tag so I can avoid such novels

Not Aiyana

Off we go

Finally back, I thought you dropped the novel, came back better in every aspect, keep it going!! now gotta fill with random words, good novel tho ;)

you say that but there's a romance tag...it's not adding up. I haven't read it due to the tag but if there isn't romance lmk...thanks

Quick review summary, i was expecting a villain when I saw the villain tag...he's not...at best a kind anti-hero, first thing that annoyed me...if you want to portray him as a villain, why give him such a massive weakness as family and try to call it his 'strength'...everything else was aight, but if you're looking for a power-hungry mc that would do everything and anything for power (as was said in the first couple chapter of this novel) don't read this