After a while, I personally didn't like the writing style, character description and interaction, so I left it ch324

Can we leave out Eleanor's introduction style? It's starting to be an uncomfortable read. Other people's characters are also understandable. There's no need to explain how she/he made their entrance. And other girls liking astron is enough, their thoughts are disturbing 1 in 3 chap

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Is this still going or it's dropped?I hope it continues

A conversation shouldn't last a whole episode, too many inner thoughts

I hope Emily's situation is important for the story. If it is unnecessary, it would just be ridiculous for so many chap.tftc

You can quickly summarize it in a few lines, there is no need to go into such detail about their thoughts.

Too many side character stories, please shorten or reduce them.

Wrong chap this one is old

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It would be interesting to add some drama and have Irina ask about Estelle[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

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Deleting the app and reinstalling it fixed it, sorry for the inconvenience.[img=Speechless][img=Speechless]

ali's story is written

last one still same

last 3 chapter repeating or another novel

Pls mass release.Tftc[img=update]