candy_crush_8906
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candy_crush_89061yrCommentedthis thing of confusing Wendy's name for Linda is annoying. It Makes one lose interest. even some paragraphs do not make sense because of a bunch of errors. I'm not asking for you to be perfect, but atleast try minimize the mistakes. also pay attention to the pronouns you use. one thing we will be talking about a woman but the pronoun used will be one that represents a Male 'He', it's so confusingđ¤
"About what? Will you beg her to ease my awkward position? Do you think she'll know how to hold back just because you're backing off? If she was really a person who understands etiquette, then she would not pester me like this. She did this simply because she wanted to warn me to stay away from you, and even though she broke up with you, she still wanted to control your future life. Do you really want to be in control of your own exâgirlfriend for your entire life? "