definetlyundead

The thing, I don't wanna spoil, but I think it will be revealed in the next 3 chaps. I'm planning it for chapter 9, but the plan's not settled yet

Kinda, yeah. Bug he doesn't know it's avalon

red like the colour blood happens to be

Nice to hear

I tried my best and there were really a lot. I guess I corrected only half of it, so if anyome still finds some, just write a paragraph comment and I'll fix it

Glad that it's to your liking. You're the first reviewer so I'll never forget you. And I don't plan on dropping this, I just have few time for writing.

fixed it. if you find anything else just report it

That is called disguise

if you would see the office pen of your mother that she used to write with during her lifetime, would you say 'omg'? Just kidding, that's a bad example, but for your information:He sensed it, but this chapter wasn't in his pov, so I didn't wrote about it.

at least thats how she died in the normal story