What a fantastic story! The events are as fast as they should be, you used an inclusive description to make readers enter the world of the story. Also, I liked Ethan very much, he is strong and determined, and I am eager to discover what's gonna happen in the next chapters.

I like this quote very much, it is impressive in such a way that makes me lose myself in the story.

I like it this story very much, thank you for writing such a masterpiece, i would love to read more by you in the future, that must amazing to read.