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I don't know if I can continue this fic, I'm writing this as a comment instead of a review because this is for bias reasons. I understand why the MC acts the way he does but I cringe so much reading/listening whenever the MC is talking, and I can't just skip lines since as the Mc he ends up talking a lot.
I don't get how I'm being uptight, I know this is a fan fic but this sentence is implying that all longinous class sacred gears house souls of creatures/entitys which simply isn't true. Unless the author changed it, but I'm caught up to the latest chapters and that still seems to be incorrect. Id whole heartedly remove my comment or apologize if this changes later in the story, but so far it hasn't.
those are not what longinous sacred gears are
and isn't super devil class ahead of Satan class
Alr thx for responding but I'm pretty sure it goes trihexa, shiva, ophis then great red since it was said shiva could kill trihexa but he'd destroy the word in the process, honestly I really wish DXD had better ranking system/we didn't only watch from the abrahamic faction point of view.
How strong would you say the mc is at this point?
How strong would you say the mc is at this point if the story
I'm sorry but Yasaka is nowhere near Sirzechs [img=Exhaling]
Honestly the fic is such a huge info dump that it gets boring, and the Mc drags on fights for no reason, and my least favorite aspect is that the Mc barely converses with others directly.
C'mon man read the story, their talking about the alternate Alin caused by Uncle Tsukishimas full ring.