I’m really enjoying the novel so far. The grammar could have some improvements, however it is only minor mistakes and is far better then the majority of what is on this site. Overall I highly recommend this for any marvel or Harry Potter fans.

Good novel so far. Definitely has great grammar. Highly recommend if you want an interesting read. I don’t know anything about Fate, yet I still enjoy reading this.

I absolutely love it so far. I definitely agree that you need to read the first 5 chapters before deciding if you want to stop. The writing has no faults i can find and really grips me. Overall I would suggest you give it a try and follow this author to see what more he will bring.

It’s ok, a few issues here and there with the grammar. But better then the vast majority of the unreadable novels on this site. Overall it’s not groundbreaking and is fun to past the time.

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Ohhhh I just read the fun fact. I was so confused who this superhero was. I haven’t seen the diabolical ones. Are they good?