Adam_Br

Mistake. Leone winning against his own tribe? That makes no sense. There should be some editing before posting. Mismatched names are regular in this novel. It almost feels like ai wrote this.

I think this is not the first time when instead of Leone mc name is changed to Alex. Obvious mistake but I wonder why

Shitty author. „Don’t read” is the only thing this shitty author left in this book

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Author you have interesting definition of „fine”🤦‍♂️ Nevertheless I agree that the story can’t have plot armour around everyone but why her?😢 I know I know… so it’ll have more impact on the reader than if it happened to some nameless background character😞 for the world to be more fleshed out and dangers more real😞

But something horrible happened to her😢

Is the novel dead?

If this is really the end of this novel then I’m very disappointed 😔 it was quite entertaining to read but the ending is too sudden. Now I regret buying and reading it. This novel had potential but now everything that’s left is great disappointment.

When it showed in my recommendations I decided to give it a try and I don’t regret it. It’s quite good. I have high hopes for this novel. I rarely start to read novels that have less than 300-400 chapters that aren’t finished. Author plz don’t drop this I hope to read it for a long time;)

One of my favorites. Overall great novel.