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Ahle9mthCommentedSo there should be zero buildings, fires, wheels, clothes, processed food, language, etc. This is really a moronic story point.
"Even though humans kept increasing in number with coming generations, the ones who knew about Science died of old age, leaving no knowledge behind."- Ahle10mthCommented
I'm losing braincells by the moment
Although I would have liked to believe this Lurker character existed, whenever I used my dragon eyes skill there was no appearance of someone hiding in the academy. There was currently only one person who could avoid my detection and that was Sir K himself. Perhaps he knew of this myth between students and thought it was a good cover up for the real person who had informed him. - Ahle10mthCommentedCh 62 Basic tier crystals
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ITS BEEN 10 YEARS WHY DO YOU BROHER HAVING A TIKE SKIP IF YOURE JUST GOING TO IGNORE IT AND WRITE USING YOUR SINGLE DIGIT IQ
I was shocked at what I heard. The shadow plague only took people if it was worth their effort. When a person is infected by the shadow plague one of two things happen to them. The first thing is the host goes mad and dies within the year. - Ahle10mthReplied to Jon_Kade
bro what tf
"Unfortunately not, until you learnt the basics at Avrion academy, you are not permitted to leave the city. Please feel free to visit the library or even the church to get a blessing from the divine being." - Ahle10mthCommented
they never once dueled during the 10 year time skip? really?
"The last time I fought Ray I won easy." - Ahle10mthCommented
Hot garbage rolled up into a novel. What's the point of going to an academy if you just want to not learn and just have free time? Why must the author insist he gets zero points! It's the dumbest thing, I do not believe for a second that him beating the mage would cause then to rule him a failure. Same with the bow. Same with the first test, where the 1000 year old dragon was so emotionally unstable he lashed out at the test giver for zero reason. He learned nothing during a 10 year time skip, forgot about his dog, and didn't even bother to learn to control his human body better. Every plot point is dumb and contrived, and I am still in the first ark so it'll probably only get worse from here.
Ch 34 Bad Luck - Ahle10mthCommented
all this basic info should have been discussed during the time skip. you basically just froze mc in time and didn't progress at all, a better solution would be to have no time skip at all and just have the trials begin at 15.
"While studying here you will find out the history of alure kingdom and Avrion academy. There is no rush. Follow along please." - Ahle10mthCommented
absolutely braindead conclusion here
He refused to believe that humans were far superior to dragons. - Ahle11mthCommented
I hope for no academy ark but if so please don't make it cliche
"The Royal Academy? What's that?" Leo asked. He was very intrigued by it. - Ahle11mthCommentedCh 42 Shadow Step
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bro just destroyed the dagger that cost him most of his savings. you could have at least had him do it on the knife he bought before the expensive one
The bullet pierced the knife before flying to the ground. He looked at it again and saw that the bullet had made a hole in the dagger. - Ahle11mthCommented
he was going he was going he was going could all be compressed into 1-2 non repetitive sentences
They finished eating quickly and went back to their own rooms. They learned to give each other space over the past years. The next day, Leo set out early in the morning. He was going to the market to meet Trevor. He was going to the forest again. This time, he was going to get only two herbs. He needed the money to buy an Aura Training method as well as a new dagger. - Ahle11mthReplied to Wendell_Woodward
the paragraph directly after the one you left this comment on says he received notes and not a stack of coins my guy
Trevor smiled at his response. "Fine. Here are 3900 Star coins. Pleasure doing business with you. You can come again any time with whatever you find and I will accommodate you." - Ahle11mthReplied to heli
I'd assume that they made the satchel themselves, maybe out of scrap leather from a tannery. Probably should have been specified though
The next day, he left along with Daphne. Unlike before, his satchel wasn't all torn up. Instead, he got a new satchel, because he would need to carry the herbs carefully. The satchel had three different categories, one for each herb. It was very ambitious, but he needed to do it. The only other thing he had was his knife. The knife was the only purchase he had ever made with his savings that wasn't food. He had bought it a year ago, and this would be the first time he would use it properly. - Ahle11mthReplied to Saad_Yousuf
that's an even bigger hurtle to overcome
This paragraph has been deleted. - Ahle11mthReplied to Andrew_Smith_9850Ch 9 Trouble
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it'd have been funny if they had the under 30 competition now instead of way earlier
"I'm 29 years old now. Soon, I will become 30… the age when I killed myself during the previous life." he spoke to himself and recounted his gains in the past 10 months since he came to the Beast Empire. - Ahle11mthCommented
spears > swords change my mind
"Because they're not as effective as a sword other than the long range they provide?" Kahn questioned back. - Ahle11mthCommented
this is a very clear and nice analogy 👍
It was like fish having an affinity with Water. But if someone used a high pressured water jetspray against them, the fish would still die.