SlySmile
As long as it is good plot, not abused plot armor spamming, and has good depth and character development I'll read it!!! đđ
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SlySmile2hCommented[I dislike being treated like an invalid,] she shudders. [Those healers wouldn't let me walk unaided until I started hitting them with a stick. They didn't mind that I hit them, but they felt it demonstrated I was stable enough to move around on my own.]- SlySmile22hCommented
Welp, I kinda feel bad for the Priestess(?) who died, she was an ally of the MC, right? Can't he use a buffed angelic ability to resurrect her or even keep her soul in order to bring her back to life since Danny is inside him since his grimoire ability has a free slot now? [img=thinking]
Ch 748 Improvements - SlySmile22hCommented
Lol, did the MC's IQ drop since he asked this question? [img=thinking] Did he just forget how devious and scheming people in power are? [img=thinking]
'Should I not trust him? I thought we were grateful for him protecting us and the Tritan Alliance.' He thought, only for Danny to sigh deeply. - SlySmile1dCommented
My take on this chapter is that, the Fang's indeed have favoritism, they have two parents, mother and father, we could throw away the mother coz she obviously favor her 'baby' instead of loving them all equally, so then, what about the father? What was his reason for leaving and abandoning the brothers when knowing his eldest already had the mother gunning to immediately support her? Is he worried he'd get cuck'd coz of the strong people from the nest? Or does he also favor the eldest? [img=thinking]
Ch 746 Understood - SlySmile2dCommented
In short, trash woman was much more worried about her 'adult' 'baby' girl than her own 'younger' 'teenage' sons, their father also seems to forget about their own sons' existence as well, coz after all those years and the misunderstandings cleared, they didn't even bother too take them in and take responsibility for their abandonment, also, Hesta seems to have also forgoten about her own younger brothers... to summarize, Hesta is the only child that matters, the MC and his brother are mistakes they couldn't bother to take care of up until the point when Danny died and they had to take care of his soul for certain purposes [img=thinking][img=disgusted] Their family is indeed a prime example of a rotten one in my point of view since only one child mattered [img=angry] Lastly I really wondered what would have happened when the MC and his mom reunited for the 1st time and the MC didn't tell her that he the one she's trying to intimidate to death is actually her youngest child, would she had killed him if he didn't give that answer since she doesn't seem to feel any sort of blood relation between him and her furthering the point that she's a horrible parent [img=thinking]
"I thought that they were going to hurt you. IâŚcouldn't return to tell you I had to leave. It would have exposed my home and your existence. I know that I could have stayed behind as well, but leaving Hesta alone with the Nest was not something I couldn't do either. Hesta might have been an adult, but she has always been my little baby. If I could help her just a little bit by being next to her while the Nest harmed herâŚI thoughtâŚ" - SlySmile3dCommented
Pfft!!! Mommy stole their male prospect... đ
"The one marrying our dear guest in the present, will be me, as for my daughters they will be engaged for the time being". - SlySmile9dCommented"Hmm..." Mark nodded. "I get you. Even Naofumi's shield needed to transform so he could attack. A simple shield alone had limited capabilities unless you were skilled and strong enough to use it like a boomerang or bash it against enemies."
- SlySmile11dCommented
*m'ussent(?) is this some kind of slang or accent? If not, then, -> "mustn't" or just use "must not"
This paragraph has been deleted. - SlySmile11dCommented
*smarted -> smartest
Articuno nodded and let Blanche climb on top, then they flew away. - SlySmile12dCommented
*picked -> piqued
Naomi remained behind, lost in her thoughts for a moment, before her eyes locked onto the direction of the guest area, her curiosity was now picked, her sister has never found anyone in the same range of age to let alone make her doubt her capacity to win, but even fight on par with her, so it would be a lie to say she wasn't interested on it. - SlySmile13dCommented
*consensus -> consciousness [img=thinking]
This paragraph has been deleted. - SlySmile24dCommentedAsh shook his finger in front of Bill, "No don't call me Ash right now," then he swiftly took out and out on a lab coat, "Call me Professor Fraxinus."
- SlySmile24dCommented"A lot more than you can imagine," Yoruichi said without a change in her casual tone. "For starters, he wants to protect me from harm. You, my former disciple, are looking to murder me. It's common sense to choose him over you, right?"
- SlySmile28dCommented
Of course there would, you get defeated due to heavy nosebleed...
Soi Fon's eyes widened before her cheeks flushed. Coughing, she looked away. "Not like it will change anything." - SlySmile29dCommented
Lol đ
Using the hand speed he had honed in twenty years of bachelorhood, Lin Xun swiftly went through his options. - SlySmile1mthCommented
Nope, too overwhelming for new trainers, if a rechallenge after getting the badge perhaps, but normal gym battles is a huge "NO" [img=thinking]
Should some gym leaders be able to use megas in their Gym battle? - SlySmile1mthCommented"Push-ups, sit-ups, and plenty of juice," Ash said with a smile.
- SlySmile1mthCommented
Why is this status board broken? Still not updated?... [img=thinking]
Title : [The Prodigy] [The Gentleman] [Martial Artist] [Samurai] [Man of steel] [The degenerate] [The strong willed] [Gym rat] [The lone wolf] [The man of the house] [Investor] [The polite pervert] [Reader] [A handsome man] [The nice guy] [Breathing Master.]..... - SlySmile1mthCommented
This thing still didn't update... [img=thinking]
Title : [The Prodigy] [The Gentleman] [Martial Artist] [Samurai] [Man of steel] [The degenerate] [The strong willed] [Gym rat] [The lone wolf] [The man of the house] [Investor] [The polite pervert] [Virgin] [Reader] [A handsome man] [The nice guy] [Breathing Master.].....