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_DragonAsura1yrReplied to Anna_AnnalieseCh 16 Talking with Chao Zheng- _DragonAsura1yrReplied to GifflarGod
I will change the wording, it is not remote.
This paragraph has been deleted. - _DragonAsura1yrReplied to GifflarGod
There is really nothing else that happens during this month-long period, so there would not be enough to write about
One month later, Chao Feng had finished making the seventy or so spiritual meals that would last Chao Yuan around twenty days, the time it would take for Chao Feng to finish the Black Dragon Academy Admission Test. - _DragonAsura1yrReplied to GifflarGod
Rewrote chapter 1
Black Dragon Academy, far past Great Chao City and into the remote countryside. - _DragonAsura1yrReplied to
I see. I think that I should not rewrite the entire thing and only rewrite the bad parts of the story, while also adding new parts such as his backstory. I will begin on that now
Black Dragon Academy, far past Great Chao City and into the remote countryside. - _DragonAsura1yrReplied to GifflarGod
Yeah, I will start to include his journey to these places and not just go from one scene to another
Black Dragon Academy, far past Great Chao City and into the remote countryside. - _DragonAsura1yrReplied to GifflarGod
I will explain it eventually
In the Lower Chaotic Realm, the Black Dragon Academy was one of the most prestigious institutes, but it was also one of the hardest to be admitted to. The admission test commenced in four days, and before then, Chao Feng needed to reach the Black Dragon Academy, awaken his dantian and have a basic foundational understanding of cultivation to even have a slight chance to pass the test. - _DragonAsura1yrReplied to GifflarGod
I envisioned it to be, with one rear gate that only certain people could access and the main gate, which everyone could
The Black Dragon Academy was surrounded by a large square black gate with a huge logo in the middle that was cut in half due to it also being the doors of the gate. - _DragonAsura1yrReplied to GifflarGod
What do you mean?
The actual main building was larger than the Chao Divine Clan Branch Palace and it had the entire countryside as its garden. There were many smaller building that were around the size of the palace dotted around the main building. - _DragonAsura1yrReplied to GifflarGod
Are you talking about exact meas ourements?
The actual main building was larger than the Chao Divine Clan Branch Palace and it had the entire countryside as its garden. There were many smaller building that were around the size of the palace dotted around the main building. - _DragonAsura1yrReplied to GifflarGod
Thank you for the advice. I do agree with you that the pacing is too fast, I will begin to slow it down. I didn’t consider that the clan would already have spiritual chefs, that is my fault. I do not understand what you mean by this, does not have one what? Now that you mention it, it would have better to go in depth on his backstory. Maybe in the future, I can expand on it.
Ch 2 Prologue(2) - _DragonAsura1yrPosted
Hello! Author here! Here is a brief overview on what the story is about. The story follows an abandoned child called Xing Feng and his journey from a broke child to an ace chef and eventually to a cultivator in the ruling clan of his realm; the Chao Divine Clan. In my opinion, the best part of the novel will eventually be the world-building, I have planned it quite meticulously. There will most likely be romance, but as I don’t like harems myself, I am not going to add a harem to this story. There will be no sexual scenes and the story will mostly focus around Chao Feng’s journey to the highest peak of cultivation. I hope you can enjoy my story and also feel free to leave me some constructive criticism. Thank you for reading!