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no sorry I've had a family emergency and been occupied. I will be back soon though

I see once again this being pointless as I have mentioned to several people in separate comments that the final selection of female companions will not exceed 5 by the end of the story. but again even if I never said that your comment would be pointless because 1) it was tagged harem if you have a problem you shouldn't be reading harem 2) the harem wasnt even introduced yet so your problem is null and void. again I repeating myself because you haven't said anything new. and again the 1 star review you have was clearly about the tattoos and the harem not the writing otherwise you would have mentioned it but you never did. which is why I have such a problem with your nonsense review as it's not even a workable critique it's a personal preference and has no place for a review. also I can tell you haven't read far as that one thing you pointed out as "bloated" happened in the first chapter and was also wrong, in the entirety of the chapter I mentioned the lights twice, first for the opening to lay the scene and the second for conveying stress for the MC like 8-10 paragraphs later. that's it. hardly repeating myself when it was used differently the two times I mentioned the lights

I see you didn't respond to my criticism of your review but instead diverted to something you never mentioned. if your review had been on my writing style and my "empty words" I would have been chill and taken criticism as my writing isn't perfect and I do hope to improve. but you didn't you mentioned things like a harem, when a tag was clearly already there so if you dont like that content you shouldn't have read it, as well as pointless stuff like tattoos. in fact your entire 1 star review was simply based on tattoos

the members in the harem list wont all last until the end. I'm thinking max of 5 at the moment but that is subject to changed depending on how the characters feel going forward.

I meant views hahahahahah

thank you for the question, and honestly I hadn't thought of her but now that you've said that I feel like she could be perfect for the MC even one of the most loyal despite his constant changes.... you've given me a lot to think about

thank you for the review! in glad that you're enjoying it so far

thank you so much for your review! I'm glad that you're enjoying g my novel so far!