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good stuff. no cringe. a lot to explore.

so i am at 40-50. story and the world is good but the writing style is so ass. like why every author on webnovel love to repeat some words (example, author has used scowled and grimaced a million times already). and also there's a lot of over explanation as if author is trying too hard. ik when u start your first novel you tend copy others like copying thr explanation of an object. i by no mean trying to hate but i wanted to know that did the writing improve? or did no one gave the advice to the author to improve? i will still read the story, it's just the experience makes me a bit hesitant. love to the author for the awesome world and power system he build.

tos?

2 times now

NAAAAAAH DUDE!

Ntr....NOOOOOOOOOOO

author...das the answer

saitama was out for 20 something chaps

wait till you see the dumb mc