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was fun until the story progressed pass Babylon. it went from fun and funny to just being everywhere all at once and became more annoying to read imo.

saw a comment mention Blue mountain state, and instantly my first choice. should def go visit it at least that would be hilarious.

Great story and am looking forward to more chapters.

looking forward to how the story progresses, there are not many COTE fanfics that aren't a.i or they are just plain trashy.

i just find her character incredibly boring. just not a fan, and would much rather anyone else.

great story so far and am hoping you continue to keep up with updates.

ugh i don't know which i dislike more the Tonks or Luna pairing options. don't get what everyone likes about them. could choose any other character and i would be happy.

if you don't like writing fights, why don't you try doing a slice of life/romance or something similar.

hope its not Rachel.

i have been enjoying it so far without the system giving him missions and such. the reactions from the chat are a nice touch and the story seems to come together nicely so far, and i am looking forward to more. :D