Great storytelling, The character's emotions are drawn out quite vividly. The world-building Is done well enough that I am able to see a clear image in my mind. Can't wait for more chapters to come out.A star created by a brilliant rising author.

I’m seeing a diamond in the rough awaiting to be polished. The story is great and the characters feel human. Could use some polishing on punctuation and minor grammatical errors. Otherwise a very pleasant read. [img=More pls]

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