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Check out my novel: Memories Beyond Mortality!

2023-04-26 JoinedUnited States
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  • Adrian_Jeremy
    Adrian_Jeremy8mth
    Replied to Sonu_Siraj

    I intend to have the romance be quite involved, however, there may be more than one interest! I'm planning on breaking away (slightly) from cliches, so I would definitely suggest keeping up with the novel! Unlike most novels, the romance will be built throughout the novel - the current arcs don't have any, but it will come back in the next arcs (~15-30 chapters)!

    Memories Beyond Mortality
    Fantasy · Adrian_Jeremy
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  • Adrian_Jeremy
    Adrian_Jeremy9mth
    Posted

    I was browsing through Webnovel's Forums and noticed this gem! I read through a few chapters, and I have to admit that the writing quality far surpasses most of the novels on this website. Beyond that, the author is extremely prolific; they've already released nearly 14 chapters in 2 days. Having just read through the novel, I think my only feedback would be that the pacing is rushed and the characters are not that complex yet, but I can definitely see this novel becoming an extremely good read with some editing.

    Reborn as Rose Elizabeth
    History · Lovepostion19
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  • Adrian_Jeremy
    Adrian_Jeremy9mth
    Replied to Romance_guy

    Not really (but kinda!)

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  • Adrian_Jeremy
    Adrian_Jeremy9mth
    Replied to Romance_guy

    Nope! There will be romances within the novel though - quite involved ones, in fact.

    Memories Beyond Mortality
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  • Adrian_Jeremy
    Adrian_Jeremy9mth
    Posted

    I thought this was a very enjoyable novel; the main character's internal monologues were extremely on point. The novel was extremely different from the majority of novels on this website; it was a lot slower paced, but, if anything, this was a positive - reading the novel was relaxing and I found myself excited for when the main character would start painting his first painting; I'm incredibly curious about what he'll decide to make - will it be his lost lover?

    Testament of My Regrets
    LGBT+ · Seamless Sky
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  • Adrian_Jeremy
    Adrian_Jeremy9mth
    Posted

    Thank you so much for taking the time to read this novel! Writing this story has been a labor of love, and I hope that you've enjoyed the adventures, characters, and emotions that have unfolded within its pages so far. Remember that your voice matters, and your feedback can help make future chapters even more captivating. Your insights are incredibly valuable as they help shape and refine my storytelling. Whether it's a comment about a specific scene, a character you've grown fond of, or a suggestion for improvement, your feedback is a gift that I greatly appreciate. Thank you again for embarking on this journey with me. May the adventures you find within these pages linger in your imagination and inspire you in your own life's journey. Warmest regards, Adrian_Jeremy

    Memories Beyond Mortality
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  • Adrian_Jeremy
    Adrian_Jeremy9mth
    Posted

    This is a beautifully written novel. The characters - just 4 chapters in - are exceptionally crafted. I can vividly imagine Caroline being a real person: a kind soul carrying an unfathomable weight with her and facing the unfairness of life with the best she can. Irene, an angel on Earth, doing her best to support her friend, her lover. I'll be honest. This isn't my favorite genre to read. I love action, adventure, epic fantasy worlds. But, this novel will be one of the few exceptions to the rule - I can already tell. I'm extremely excited to see where the story goes and (hopefully!) to discover some kind of happy ending for Caroline.

    Pomegranates For Dinner
    Urban · Sinbau
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  • Adrian_Jeremy
    Adrian_Jeremy9mth
    Posted

    This book is a diamond in the rough. If anything, that's an understatement - this could easily be one of the top 3 books I've read. First, the plot is genuinely amazing so far. I have no bones to pick with it; I wouldn't change it if I could. Second, the setting (I love the dog!) is great as well. With that said, I think there need to be 1 or 2 adjustments to grammar and how things are described, but despite these, I would strongly recommend reading this novel - it's one of a kind and it's already an amazing read! I can't wait for more.

    Nautiquarium - Aquatic Realm of Monsters and Mysteries
    Sci-fi · PuppetsMaster
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  • Adrian_Jeremy
    Adrian_Jeremy9mth
    Replied to NecroLord_99

    That's in the works! Look forward to the next arc, where the skill system will be explained more fully!

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  • Adrian_Jeremy
    Adrian_Jeremy9mth
    Posted

    I'll be honest. This story is a gem in the rough. Could there be some improvements? Yeah. But, there's always room for work. The dialogues, the characters, the world are all extremely fun and inviting. The story is perfectly paced and reads naturally. I'm new to this website, but I am more than happy to say that this is going to be the first book I'm adding to my collection. I'm only four chapters in and am hopelessly addicted.

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  • Adrian_Jeremy
    Adrian_Jeremy9mth
    Posted

    Looks like a really interesting novel so far! There's a very interesting premise of God using the main character in order to see if he needs to make improvements to the Earth!

    Maxing out my luck in a cultivation world
    Fantasy · JustAPerson1010283
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  • Adrian_Jeremy
    Adrian_Jeremy9mth
    Commented

    I liked the chapter so far! The idea of life being a testing experience is really clever!

    Ch 1 A universe greater then the others
    Maxing out my luck in a cultivation world
    Fantasy · JustAPerson1010283
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