Erikes_Alves

A very interesting idea with good execution so far (C17). I usually prefer power fantasies, but it's a good fanfic I recommend, it would be interesting if he learned magic from the witch that appears in Kaito Kid.

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And well, the strength progression is good too, hope it continues like this author, good luck.( Google tradutor)....................................................................

It's at a good speed.

Very good breaks most of the clichés in the genre, I especially liked the descriptions of the techniques and the pseudo-science that the author used. (Google translator).....

I liked it so far (chapter 25), I just thought it was kind of weird how he left the orphanage, I understood why it was so fast and he kind of had no "Reasons" since the supernatural didn't have any clues about him, but I really liked it please continue author🤙(Google translator).

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