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OddOne993hCommentedFirst just wanna say I love this story, it’s extremely well written and very engaging. But I can’t help but feel bad for the MC, cause it just dawned on me in this chapter. He’s like, in his late forties and since his reincarnation he’s had this singular focus on his company and the Aliance; trying to get everything ready for the reapers. To the point where he forgot to live his own life. I mean seriously he got “reincarnated” a second chance at life into a space opera! And he hasn’t gone on any adventures or done anything unexpected. He’s never even have a girlfriend I don’t think. He just works… all day every day, that’s just sad.
Ch 54 Interesting Times - Chapter 54- OddOne998hCommented"I meant, did it hurt while falling from heaven? Because you sure do look like a goddess," the stranger replied, attempting to flirt with her although unfortunately, she didn't realize that he was actually flirting.
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Thanks for the chapter 😁👍 Small critique, next time you write a dog fight, focus more on the MCs Immediate pov rather than on the whole squads comm chatter and Maneuvers. I get you were trying to paint a accurate picture of the entire battle. But reading this felt more like a after action report and it was kinda hard to fallow.
Ch 16 Starfighter Training - OddOne991dReplied to L0rds2278
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In fact, he declined having a seat on the council a couple of times. Just a suggestion but you might wanna watch the movies again to brush up on the lore…
"It is natural you do not know him. Master Qui-Gon is a Jedi Master, much like myself. He also shares a seat on the council, much like I do. The Sith had been hiding for years. Master Dooku has repeatedly warned the council of an encroaching darkness, is his claim really true then?", Master Plo began to utter, letting his voice grow softer after answering Kohsaka. - OddOne992dCommented
Never liked the look of that ship, looks like a super star destroyer with a Conjoined twin 😂
"It's great that you guys think my design is good. Now I also have another design, it's an inspiration from the Harrower-class used by the Sith. And it's a Star Destroyer." I said as I showed them the drawing of the Gladiator-I Star Destroyer. - OddOne992dCommented
So what exactly is the size of the MCs dragon transformation. Is it the size of King Ghidorah from the movies cause a few chapters back it made it sound like it was just a little taller than White Beard (which is hilarious if that’s the case) so I’m a little confused.
I would need to bathe myself in lightning, or electricity. One or the other, and currently lightning was bountiful around me. I slowly grew into my draconic form, all three heads of mine facing the heavens as I spread my long wings far and wide. Slowly, lightning started to charge from the clouds surrounding the peak. - OddOne992dCommented
Thanks for the chapter 😁👍 Small request/suggestion perhaps you could finish with the HP universe before moving on to other universes like Game of Thrones; not that I mind a good crossover and I know the MC came to G.O.T. To study and or hunt dragons but he isn’t doing that. In stead he went well out of this way to set up a religion, Introduse various technologies and to make Danny queen. Which is great I’d be very interested to see where this goes; if there wasn’t still adventures to be had, a dark lord to put down and pretty much a love maze to make sense of back in the HP universe.
Ch 181 Chapter 181: Arrival at Pentos — A Dazzling Scene - OddOne994dCommentedCh 67 Chapter 67
- OddOne994dCommentedI ran as fast as I can towards my orphanage ( while original Aiden got lost, I had an advantage of eidetic memory and all memories of Aiden, using which I found my way to the orphanage) and went to my room. locked the door and quickly ( filled with an unusual amount of excitement) laid the loot on my bed. I fiddled with the trunk and when I tapped what looked like to be a rune, trunk got enlarged. I opened the trunk and looked inside. It had a lot of stuff for a small trunk ( space enlargement and weightless runes I presume). I quickly went through the stuff and found a few robes and books, a whole lot of books, a pouch, and a broom. The pouch contained a lot of coins, many of which were gold and a few bronze and silver. I almost shouted "Jackpot" but quickly calmed myself and started to look at books. Books were nothing special just Hogwarts yearbooks for all seven years on all core subjects ( transfiguration, potions, charms, DADA, history of magic, astronomy, herbology ) and two electives (Arithmancy, Ancient runes). The only book that stood out was on occlumancy. I really hit the jackpot with the occlumancy book ( i like my mind protected, thank you very much), from what I read in Harry Potter books occlumancy was a rare art and books on it were highly regulated.
- OddOne995dCommentedMission Objective: Survive.
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I never understood how the MirandaXJack ship started, I mean in the games didn’t they hate each other like a lot?
Samael slowly closed the door. '' I saw the way you looked at Jack, and you both need some stress relievers right now. Also, you will make a cute couple, trust me.'' - OddOne9916dCommentedCh 13 Chapter 12
- OddOne9920dCommentedCh 39 The "interrogation" (Part 2)