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hi
Lots of authors on Webnovel don't speak English as their first language. Don't worry, too much though.
so far with the opening act and the first chapter, this is my honest opinion. the idea is good. but the grammar could use some work. mainly with just double-checking and adding a few more words here or there to make it sound more smooth. but besides that, it's fine. and after you release more chapters I'll update my review. and lastly. thank you for creating a new Twilight fanfic.
still, it would be nice to see a fanfic where a mc doesn't join a god and is still very op. just saying.
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I don't even know
I still don't get why so many reincarnaters always join a famila and not just be solo with no god especially if they have a system. or powerful magic that can enhance them both physically and magically. what is your opinion?