Randomdude42

This is a very good Naruto story and I like a lot, but he was some of my concerns and praises for the author. The character designs are amazing. You did a great job of fusion yagura and Jason together. The dialogue between characters is also very good. The characters feel like they’re actually talking and not just robots. The only complaint I have for the story development is that it’s taken somewhat too long just to reach a certain point in the timeline, but also the counteract on what I just said I really like how you are controlling his strength and making the development of his strength reasonable. A side concern I have is that with how he is devolving his strength I don’t see how he’s going to be able to get to super kage level or have enough strength to somewhat fight back madara in his reanimation form. You’ve done a good job on describing and planing out scenes for the background development of the hidden mist, especially cause most of the time other authors just rushed through it and just say the policies and the effect they will have in short term and long term. But you actually show the reactions to the policies. This is all I’m going to say for now. I’m gonna continue reading and if what I am saying sounds like gibberish it’s because I am currently awake at 11:59 PM and I need to go to bed oh, it just turn midnight as I was saying this that’s cool.

The name lol why did the author choose that

I honestly just like this the potential is great you have capture the joker likeness so far which I really like. This is just good I will make a more detail review when there are more chapters and when I am not tired.

I hope your surgery goes successful

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I like it a lot the story is pretty good the pacing of the story needs os,e work other than that I say that it is very good thanks for the story

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Chinese fanfic?

Nah you are good I just wanted to tell you

What are you talking about? In literally cannon confirm Hinata is alive even in living in Boruto