Dhruv_kumar11

Feng yuan

Backwash!!! Mera Lora, jhat bhar ka kahani hai sala... Aaaa...Thuuu...

No... no, too good. I died from happiness 😊.

I'm dead. Thanks for the reply.

Ok, now I will give my review! First question? What is his motive? And who are his enemy? If it is Hall Of Soul, than for your kind information, Xiao Yan with his Pokémons is capable enough to do it himself. In the end, he will become a Dou Di along with Xiao Yan and save the entire Dou Qi continent from the mad Hun Tiandi, if this where you are taking the story, than it is a pure waste of potential of you writing skills. You writing is superb, But alas... your ideology is too narrow. You are in Xianxia world. As a character, Xiao Yan is a kind of person, who would die in the very beginning without a 100miles long plot armor. On webnovel, you will not find Xiao Yan followers, people here have seen Goats like, Wang Lin, Feng Yuan... In comparison, Xiao Yan simply pales. So... I don't even know what I'm saying. But in order to make a perfect and sensible btth fanfic, you will have to chose a side, either be against Xiao yan and Gu clan, and Hall of soul, or else, if you stick with Xiao Yan and his ideology, than your character simply isn't needed. An honest review. No hate. Simple, calm, calculative analysis.

not bad, but u well... forget it.

Ohh... buddy, it's can feel your frustration. it's hilarious, yet enjoyable.

Very smart guy, u can definitely understand things much more easily than those idiots .

Phew... very inconsistent, and i really feel pity for these weak Mc, who doesn't even have this much bit of confidence of trying to be at the top.

Yup, he is correct, Allright.