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Still trying to figure out why:1. People pay real money to read novels here2. Everyone is more concerned about content than grammar and repeated sentences, paragraphs, chapters ect.
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THCCULTIVATOR2hCommentedIt's the whole reason why mankind hasn't evolved.
That is also why mankind desired to cleanse their body and remove the impurities within their body; to grow stronger and evolve.- THCCULTIVATOR4dCommented
moles? I think the word you're looking for is "scars"
Several moles are spread alluringly on his neck and leave an aching memory of his fortunate adventures. - THCCULTIVATOR21dCommented
superman.... marvel.... run kid it's a trap! lol
While Ainz listened, he couldn't help but marvel at her sweet and tender voice, and the way she sang the song, it was the first time he had such a serene moment in his life, in a long time. - THCCULTIVATOR21dCommented
how does she know about superman?
..But superman he'll soon be. - THCCULTIVATOR26dCommented
That's what you call a "unicorn" So rare that there considered fantasy and myth.
But Rose wasn't stuck on the 'who' or the 'why' of the situation. She was taking her mother's words to heart. She would sit in the number one spot among any women Damien would gain in the future. Not through scheming and deceit, but love and aid. This was the best way to earn her place with him. - THCCULTIVATOR1mthReplied to Spirit_Immortal
- THCCULTIVATOR1mthReplied to DrAssassin17
I know right! I do what I can to help
"We have now arrived at the EIA training base. Cadets are now advised to prepare for disembarkation." - THCCULTIVATOR1mthCommented
well..... on a positive note at least he won't have to finish paying off that insanely high price of the S24
His eyelids closed as his heartbeat and breathing ceased. - THCCULTIVATOR2mthReplied to
I know right.... I do what I can š
"We have now arrived at the EIA training base. Cadets are now advised to prepare for disembarkation." - THCCULTIVATOR2mthReplied to Supreme_IQ
ok ? so... wait...what? I'm confused as to how and why the MC of your first novel is intermittently referred to the MC name of your second novel? or did miss something?
"It's fine. Anyway, Kenji, this is Khan. I found him on the streets and have chosen for him to work here with you to save up some money to have a place. He's also a fast learner, what do you think?" Fuzuramama asked as the cook raised an eyebrow, before turning to look at Khan, who had the feeling as if a human eating bear had set its gaze upon him. - THCCULTIVATOR2mthReplied to BlakLord
š¤ um..... this one! its a repeat paragraph š it's EXACTLY the same as the one before it sooooo you can lay those doubts to rest... I got you bro
The portal led him to another construction site with a dark blood purple portal, three men standing beside it as if complaining. Cy plopped his face and decided to enter that purple portal. - THCCULTIVATOR2mthPosted
This is by far my favorite story on WN. The grammar isn't as bad as most of the novels here and the few mistakes it does have are manageable. The characters and world building are just right (without multiple chapters or paragraphs repeating the same endlessly, I've found plenty and most being paid chapters) The only complaint I have is how long it took MC to use that badass trident š± or at least find or buy one to use for the day to day butt kicking LOL. If your on the fence about reading? or not? Then wait no longer it might surprise you. NOTE TO AUTHOR: Would really like to see this published š
- THCCULTIVATOR2mthReplied to BlakLord
you should know I started reading your story on a whim and wasn't expecting much, but it surprised me keep up the good work
-{Quest: Kill Baras (failed)} | -{The quest was to kill Baras, not play a role in killing Baras} - THCCULTIVATOR2mthReplied to Spirit_Immortal
šššš did you even read the comment ? I'm talking about ppl trolling novels just because of the genre, and your getting your panties in a twist about the difficulties of being a writer, little bit of advice...... if your gonna debate with someone make sure your reply is relevant to the topic at hand. š¤drop
- THCCULTIVATOR2mthReplied to BlakLord
š?
-{Quest: Kill Baras (failed)} | -{The quest was to kill Baras, not play a role in killing Baras} - THCCULTIVATOR2mthReplied to Favi_gold
no problem here just checking the relevance of your review and thanks again for confirming it has none
This book has been deleted. - THCCULTIVATOR2mthCommented
Wow deja vu
The portal led him to another construction site with a dark blood purple portal, three men standing beside it as if complaining. Cy plopped his face and decided to enter that purple portal. - THCCULTIVATOR2mthCommented
But wait..... wasn't the original quest to find him? shouldn't he get something for that?
-{Quest: Kill Baras (failed)} | -{The quest was to kill Baras, not play a role in killing Baras} - THCCULTIVATOR2mthReplied to _DEKIM_