anyone have Mtl raw of this plz?

any novels similar?

the writing style looks like that of a 3rd grader

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i seriously love this story. its freaking addicting. your way of writing is so dang good, it scratches a itch after searching for anything better than subpar for so long. keep up the good work, author!!!!

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you are a very very very talented author. keep it up. this book is honestly one of the best ive resd in terms of quality. please dont drop

no problem. ill pick it up eventually, i d just like to wait till theres more chapters honestly. id rather wait till then so that i can skip chapters that i think have a lot of filler. honestly though, not a bad novel. should for sure keep it up. i really do like sci-fi a lot so its always nice seeing someone else who is just as interested if not more

honestly*

if i hoestly have to say anything, its the fact that the test to get into the military was waaaaaaaaaay to drawn out. i like the details, but i feel there are certain things that are focused on to much (ie, some of the notifications from the system are to unnecessarily focused on), especially with the word count per chapter. the chapters are quite short, and a lot of them go into explaining small details, rather than focusing on the main story. i know a lot of people enjoy slow paced novels, and there was a lot of information being divulged, but the entrance test for the military was from chapter 77 to 219 of (from what ive picked up) was only 15ish days long in the story. im not saying thats bad, certain people enjoy the focus on all the minute details, but frankly, it feels like there was a lot of filler, and repeated information. idrc about the characters traits, as those are bound to change with time, and i like to see the end result, but i feel like it would take to much time with that kind of pace. Im not meaning to dog or anything, im just saying theres a lot of filler and repeat information. and unless the pace of the story picks up, theres bound to be a lot of dissatisfaction arrising over time. i havent read past 219, and as i said, there was a lot of information to process, but the fact that its over 200 chapters, and we havent made it off the base planet, is a buzzkill for me so imma just drop it. i hope you still keep going with it, and wish you luck, but as much patience as id like to believe i have, thats way to slow paced for me.