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The positive things: The fanfic has decent protagonist that fits nicely in the setting. Haikyuu was rarely chosen as a story setting so I am quite happy to see this fanfic. Reading the interactions between characters is fun but there it is nothing revolutionary. The negative thing: Sadly, a big negative point for me personally is the sentence structure und the grammar used in this fanfic. I would go as far as call it headache inducing. Let me be clear english is not my native language so my english skill might be limited as one might see in this review. However personally this might the first time that the writing quality forces me to pause between chapters. I hope the author can improve this.
First of All I think this FF has a lot of potential. Until the current chapter (13) the interactions with "NPCs" and the world arround him seem genuine and are fun to read which is quite important because the MC has gotten the OP Starterpack. English is not my first language so can't critique the grammar but a can say that i did not struggle in any way to read this, which is a huge plus in my book. For now i will happily recommend every cyberpunk fan to give this a read.