Could someone explain, why did the writer rewrite? Slow pacing? Directionless? Canon never started after 500k words?

Please, don’t turn Asia into stick with boons and bump. The seduction only works without unclothing herself.[img=Relaxed]

Could you give a summary? Don’t leave us hanging.

Give ruby to Megumi, infinite mana for explosions!

True brother

Next time seeing Geto, BLACK FLASH!!!

The wizard faction seems to have average int and extreme low wisdom, average smartness with no to below average determination. Maybe the over reliance on magic made them less willful.

Kenjaku diddling with his technique our main character!

Merlin clairvoyance was limited to scrying the present, his prophecies were educated guesses.

Jujutsu world actually has a force that empowers curses or sorcerers when one side gets an upperhand, however, Toji is disrupting the balance because he is a human.

Good luck Author, see you next month(s)!

I hope the author doesn’t bloat the character with too many techniques, multiple templates always feel weaker than a master doing the full and creative use of their power.

Superior celestial genes gave him allspeak, aka language sounds the same, however he can’t read or write.

What about his actions? He also crossed a line, he ordered demons to kill humans and he wanted to stay adventure instead action heavy.

This fic is filling my Frieren shaped void, the anime ended too soon.

That is transfiguration, the shape would be a dragon without the spiritual and soul parts, aka big lizard.

I like the more story focused dxd compared to the endless grinding of the necromantic journey. The main focus is not on the numbers, thank you. The reader doesn’t like an excel spreadsheet.

Thank you for the rewrite, the first version traumatized Frieren badly, she didn’t deserve that.

Frieren would say “You finally revealed your true colors! Zoltraak!”