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the story and the plot is very good , but the whole tour music arc is kinda mid , it not really bad but i feel like those song lyrics is there to fill word and make chapter a bit longer , idk really try tone it down a little bit but the devoplement till this chapter from what i saw is very good for Jon ,that all and thanks for reading this long rant.
the character is quite interesting, but unfortunately, I wouldn't say I like shy male MC a lot, so yea I hope there will be character development for him so that he can be a little confident and if his shy characteristics still appear till the end of the story then I just gonna drop the story, but hey this story is really good and easy to read, until then bye.
why did author delete some chapter XD
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this is like Gyro situation at the end of JOJO part 7