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DaoistVkK20U11hCommentedCh 33 Ch-32- DaoistVkK20U1dReplied to lord_AzathothCh 48 Ch. 46 - The Great Pretender vs The Demi-God of the Sky and Seas
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I know he is going to get the role, as far as I know Radcliffs parents didn’t even want him to become an actor. So with that dilemma, Troy would be a safer choice, aswell with the success of The Sixth Sense, then an obvious choice. But I like that you don’t just make it like it would be an easy victory for Troy, keep the suspense. Keep going, thx for the ch.😎
Ch 32 Ch-31 - DaoistVkK20U4dCommented
Love it, great chapter as always, take your time with the chapters as I think this story has great quality and potential. Idk what your ideas involved romance in the future is but Emma Watson seems like an obvious choice for a fling/relationship before he really gets into Hollywood. Maybe you have other ideas, but with him being smart and handsome I could see Emma gaining a crush though out their time filming together. Idk if you want to do the Rupert Grint as Ron, as you may have potential to make another actor as a more permanent friend aswell as an actor friend into the future of his career. Just my thoughts. Thx for the ch.😎
Ch 31 Ch-30 - DaoistVkK20U5dCommented
That isn’t a prank, this didn’t hit home with me. Plus he just seems like a spoiled brat throwing a tantrum after getting embarrassed. I understand the thought behind it, young, immature, acting before thinking. But it could have been done a lot of different ways without making the mc look unprofessional and entitled. I still like the story, but I think this chapter could have been done differently. We want to like the mc, and this wasn’t very likable or professional.
Ch 29 Ch-28 - DaoistVkK20U5dReplied to Gh0st00Ch 26 Ch-25
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- DaoistVkK20U11dCommentedCh 67 New Spider-man Cinematic Universe Pitch and my Discord Link.
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Just like the real woman, she is a gold digger.
She just nodded and smiled at her love, this was another thing she loved about him, he never stopped working on different ways to grow. His work ethic, his dedication to his craft, it spoke to her like nothing else. She could literally feel her acting become nuanced and her subtle expressions became more natural, more real. - DaoistVkK20U12dCommented
How? The dude hasn’t made one himself yet? But he is acting very high and mighty for someone who has done nothing? How does this story makes sense?
"Well, we'll never know if we don't try, but if you can keep up with my lessons. Then, yeah, I am confident that you will make a superb film." Mark said with confidence that she didn't feel in herself. - DaoistVkK20U12dCommented
If he is a private person then he should have chosen another job.
Mark then explains to Bryan that he wears the mask to separate himself from his public persona. How he is a very private person and by wearing this mask he wants to hide at least his face as well his name in anonymity. - DaoistVkK20U12dCommentedCh 33 33. The Inauguration of Eidolon.
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The director guild also doesn’t allow anonymity. Even if he use a pen name hiding the face wouldn’t be allowed… it’s just such a retard curve ball to use. Stupid.
"But when you're working on the set, filming, then your life isn't just yours anymore, it affects mine as well. So any problems that might be caused by you guys not having your act together will have consequences." He said slowly with pauses in a severe tone to build an air of oppression, showing that he was serious. - DaoistVkK20U12dReplied to LastGod
I think it could still work, he just have to start with the mission. You know the first movie is basically about his retirement. And the next 3 would be about his return. But I agree with you, would be hard to pull off.
She is shown to be going through an operation, with John sitting outside praying for her safety whilst holding the cross of Ruska Roma. - DaoistVkK20U12dCommentedCh 6 Something Unexpected.
- DaoistVkK20U12dCommented
What is this grammar?
Well, Dominic couldn't blame her; she had been having problems with her part-time job lately and didn't have much support from her family either. Emma was a beautiful and perfect girl, even though her feelings and emotions were imperfect. They suppose that's how everyone feels about the person they like. - DaoistVkK20U12dCommented
You somehow made the beginning worse than your last TWD ff. I understand making a prologue, but I really don’t see the relevance for a lot of this information. And I feel like you could skip it entirely and it wouldn’t be a problem. The reason your stories are dropped is because of the amount of useless yapping that it always end up with. Plus there is always a sort of “translated/ chat gbt” vibe to them.
Ch 2 Prologue (2)