Ghost_Cats

Are you sure ur not Cyno's family?

Nom, ty for chapter

I like it, Picasso👍

Wait is the 'Butcherer of Gods' and 'God of War' oh god.. maybe the Kalatus Chaos.. oh the plot thickens >:D

I really look forward towards this fanfic, its written nicely and easy for my dumb self to understand though I have no idea who Akira or Lila is but I guess It'll be revealed or their actually characters I forgot about in oshi no ko D: but I look forward to this fanfic as it has potential.

awww sad that it ended but have a good day author <3

I would say the writing is about a 4 because of the few sentences sometimes, but the grammar is good. The stability of updates seems to be about a couple chapters a month and then a couple the next month. There is no pattern so I say a 3 to be honest, but you post more often than me as I lose motivation a lot. Story development is great! I understand 1/4 because I only watched like one Marvel movie- my fault for that so I'll give you a 5. Also the timeline is great 'cause I didn't want you to write a year worth of what stuff Alex did- I'm glad you skipped a year. The character design is op, I like kids with op powers destroying everything (Chapter 10), so 5. The world background changed in these newer chapters and its quite good even though I don't know what it looks like 'cause I'm not really a fan of marvel and I kinda of lose where the mc is either sitting, standing, walking, ect.. So a 3. I gave my honest opinion so I hope it helps. ^w^ Total is a 4, thanks for the chapters btw

tbh I have seen them and I agree with you, I have no problem with you dropping this book. After all it's your book

Ah.. I see.. thanks for letting me know and for the tips. :D

why tf did I start cussing them whilst crying-