Kalinin
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Kalinin6mthCommentedCh 6 Underground Bloodhole- Kalinin7mthPosted
This story is beautiful detailed. The surrounding are described well, and the characters are described in detail allowing us to have a sense what they look like. Each chapter has a lot of content and isn’t slow at all. The story seems to have some inspiration from SMT but also keeping it unique in its own right. I also saw some Pokémon and Naruto references which just stood out for me for some reason. Overall a pretty good read for what content it has now.
This book has been deleted. - Kalinin11mthReplied to TaroCh 2 Black Zetsu
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- Kalinin11mthReplied to Drunken_Sleeper
Rinnegan when reaches 90%
Template: Uchiha Itachi (SO6P level) - Kalinin11mthReplied to _JMR_
Scaled his power to the level of Sage of six path. With the power shown in the black clover manga, I thought it would be fine
Template: Uchiha Itachi (SO6P level) - Kalinin1yrCommentedWill's eyes widened as he stared at the two, wondering if he had taken too much of that nose candy.
- Kalinin1yrCommented
Is that even legal in Canada?
"Oh, I also wish to marry at 16." - Kalinin1yrCommentedCh 9 Wait? He’s that Raven on the internet?
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Weird sentence. You should just get rid of solution
This paragraph has been deleted. - Kalinin1yrCommentedCh 4 Becoming famous overnight
- Kalinin1yrReplied to WrightBrothers
I mean, he did mention that he was in grade nine last chapter and that Mia was in grade 10. That’s a one year age difference.
As he made his way downstairs, the scent of waffles and bacon wafted up to meet him, and he could see his mother, sister, and brother already seated around the breakfast table. - Kalinin1yrCommented
Could break up this paragraph to improve readability, but I guess it’s fine having as it is now.
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