Great chapters, looking forward to the new arc

I think it's great, she was in pain all of those years and could not trust anyone, so she subconsciously created a husband to take care of her. This has been handled really well by the author.

Good reveal. Now let's see Davis corrupt her until she likes it...

She doesn't even ask about how he knew about the birthmark, just another convenient retcon?

That is just the MC's fault for sparing him, despite the fact that he continuously tries to kill MC. MC is just reaping what he has sown.

That makes no sense, there were literally thousands of witnesses.

Umm, everyone?

I like how everyone just stands there like NPC's letting the MC head over and hand out healing items to their enemy.

Typical of this mc

Time really passes differently in this author's head huh?

I really like how Davis properly cares about loyalty and feels genuine emotion when he suffers a betrayal, many protagonists would ignore or downplay these things for a pretty face, regardless of what may or may not happen later his reaction is very realistic and highlights once again how the author is in tune with his emotions contributing to his writing ability.

These past few chapters have been great, I like these kinds of interactions a lot.

Hmm, I wonder if Davis will ever have a time travel adventure, imagine him meeting his maternal grandmother before she was killed or even a young version of his mother in some alternate timeline, things like the Time Dimension are really fascinating and open up more possibilities.

tftc

Your book gets better the more I read it, good work.

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I honestly wonder what kind of face the old "White Witch" Myria would make if she could see her future lovey dovey self and Davis now, that would be such a hilarious interaction if they went back in time or entered a parallel timeline to see her. I think she would faint on the spot.

Apology accepted, I also apologise for my part in the matter. I'm sorry to hear about your circumstances, it's also harsh that pirates are impacting you to such an extent, it's definitely not fair, the best way to think of it is exposure and advertising, many pirates wouldn't purchase the work to begin with, especially if they live in poorer countries so you can't necessarily count them as lost income. Honestly WebNovel isn't even that great a platform for money. The guy who wrote "Lust Knight" had a Patreon and was making good money with hundreds of members, he switched to WebNovel and lost it all, he didn't appreciate what he had. Regarding Dual Cultivation, trust me I definitely have my problems with that series and author, "writing out of spite", I can see why. Honestly I do think your writing is good, I'm lucky enough to have a decent job with a lot of spare time and have read literally 10 hours a day for years on end so my standards are very high, just from a literacy perspective you are better than 99% of people on WebNovel, if you can just work on creating characters and interactions with soul you'd be on the road to professional standards, something I'd sub to a Patreon for. No need to repeat the review as tbh I just wanted to get my message across to you rather than other people if I think about my original intent. Take care.

Leave it, no point in exacerbating the matter, though it is appreciable you made the offer calming things down a little as people can say/do things they don't mean when they're angry. I admit I was annoyed that my review was deleted and accused as I felt you had good writing skills, but let yourself down by endless amounts of smut with no heart, if that changes after chapter 70 something then that's a good thing, though I feel a review after the free chapters is valid. Anyway good luck with your book.