My friend from Indonesia, it is a good story that u write, I hope you can make something similar to this where it revolve in Kingdom Manga, and don't add any magic in it, I think it will be great. Semangat lu keren bro/mbak gatau dah, I'll wait for your next story..

it is a game that is quite popular here in Indonesia, it seems that the author is an indonesian like me lol