hahahahahaha i love you dude great work this was so fun and great to read

bro this story is so so great please continue it

great swork dude you got me hooked lets see how you reel me in hopefully it stays good

seems great i like it a lot hope you dont just drop it

good yea pretty good just great story but

godamn i love this idea so much

great work

great work would love to see more thanks for making it [img=update]

hahaha he's got murder on his mind 😂

you mother funker made me stay up till 2 am to read this whole thing great job man well written

slow the story meybie a bit down and this part was a bit confusing and wiard but fun overall