Faizun_Nessa

The writing quality is not the best, but it's better than others. I started reading this because I saw another work of this author and really enjoyed it. The story development is great and enjoyable. However, the writing quality is something that I'm hoping you're gonna improve at as you keep writing. Keep up the good work!

interesting story, and the writing is better than most beginners. It may be different for others, but I'm thoroughly enjoying the story. The writing may not be the best, and the descriptions may be short, but I'm sure there'll be improvements as he continues to write and receive feedback

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WOW 👌 Interesting....