I think he meant 'cut to black'. He wanted a bit more detail on that scene 😂 Wouldn't have minded that myself to be honest.

I really liked the premise of this novel, and the first ten chapters were interesting, but from there it's been 40+ chapters of ONE scene. And there's barely anything happening. The kinky role-playing felt really weird and came out of nowhere. I really hoped to see more development and exploring the world, setting and characters by this point, but by chapter 57 it's only been like an hour or something in the story since the MC arrived in that world. This is honestly too slow for me, and doesn't feel like something I would pay to unlock more.