Great story so far. I didn't expect much from a title such as this one, but I was pleasantly surprised. Serious fight scenes and no NTR, yet, but I assume there will be, soon. Keep up the good job, author

looks cyberpunk. Is that another kingdom/country?

Excellent writing quality. I really hope you keep updating it. Can't wait to read more!!

Man, do we really have to read about some other character getting a harem? lol. I think this is as close as NTR as it can get without it being actual NTR considering the whole Mary thing.

I get what you're trying to do, but you can also do it while you improve the pace. This will be good for everyone, including you. If you push your luck people will stop reading your novel. Anyway, it's good that you're taking this in stride and want to improve. I hope you do.

Bro, you really are gonna pull a chapter out of everything, won't you? Come on, man, we don't care about some inconsequential storm or some random prostitute. Don't forget that you are selling us these chapters and we're supposed to pay for this whole load of nothing.

Yeah, it's been delayed by 140 chapters already, lol

Author, stop getting sidetracked with every little thing, lol. I want to read stuff about the main plot, i.e Mary, the original MC, the academy, etc. Almost everything that has happened so far was outside of the original plot. Can you please step it up? This novel has a word count higher than The Fellowship of The Ring already and barely anything has happened.

I dropped it as well. MC is pathetic

Alright, enough. I'm dropping this. This is ridiculous

No, please kill her

Agreed with the others. The characters with MC and Laylah are annoying to read. I'll probably drop this if he doesn't kill Laylah.

He won't. I'm calling it, he'll get a chance to kill her and he won't kill her.

Man, way to ruin a good novel. The MC is pathetic right now

This novel went downhill pretty fast

He is indeed impulsive, but unreasonable? That depends how you see it. He was attacked with a lethal spell and he responded in kind. If someone tried to kill you in your own home, what would you do? Forgive him? I really hope Astra takes his side this time, and if not, that Vaan grows some balls and finally stands up to his mother. He was in the right here, who knows what would've happened if he didn't counterattack.

It is true. There is nuance to cooperation, but only so much. Even in sports, the teams with the best players win most of the times. Team work can only take you so far, and when individual abilities aren't up to par, teams will fall behind. Even if they have spent years working together.

It truly was a mistake to take away Lucius' talent. The author has to do some mental gymnastics to prevent him from getting bullied one-sidedly. 70 chapters already and the MC is still weak af, sigh...

Seems a little too convoluted and to test teamwork no less. Whilst teamwork is indeed important, it is nowhere near as important as individual abilities. Because someone with great skills has the potential to adapt to any team. It's easier to learn how to cooperate than to hone one's skills or grow in strength.

This dude's annoying, I'd avoid him, too. Good for Lance