Despitax

Great story so far. I didn't expect much from a title such as this one, but I was pleasantly surprised. Serious fight scenes and no NTR, yet, but I assume there will be, soon. Keep up the good job, author

looks cyberpunk. Is that another kingdom/country?

Excellent writing quality. I really hope you keep updating it. Can't wait to read more!!

Man, do we really have to read about some other character getting a harem? lol. I think this is as close as NTR as it can get without it being actual NTR considering the whole Mary thing.

I get what you're trying to do, but you can also do it while you improve the pace. This will be good for everyone, including you. If you push your luck people will stop reading your novel. Anyway, it's good that you're taking this in stride and want to improve. I hope you do.

Bro, you really are gonna pull a chapter out of everything, won't you? Come on, man, we don't care about some inconsequential storm or some random prostitute. Don't forget that you are selling us these chapters and we're supposed to pay for this whole load of nothing.

Yeah, it's been delayed by 140 chapters already, lol

Author, stop getting sidetracked with every little thing, lol. I want to read stuff about the main plot, i.e Mary, the original MC, the academy, etc. Almost everything that has happened so far was outside of the original plot. Can you please step it up? This novel has a word count higher than The Fellowship of The Ring already and barely anything has happened.

I dropped it as well. MC is pathetic

Alright, enough. I'm dropping this. This is ridiculous