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Only writing a review because of the surprising amount of hate I’m seeing. This novel is a masterpiece, easily the best on this app either no real competition. Most complaints I see are the main characters ”poorl development”, yet their critiques are typically along the lines of “he’s a beta”. That’s really are you need to know about the critiques- they are using the word beta unironically. Sunny is a fantastic main character with very very good development albeit slow at times. Only real PROBLEM in the novel is the occasional pacing problems and bland spots. Not really a b if deal though for something with 1700+ chapters. Of course, some things could always be better, but that’s the only real negative to the story after reading 1700 chapters.

I’m still working out plot points and such for this, but I plan on releasing it in the near future. I have a lot of ideas as of now and more to come- just have to kink them out and link everything.

This isn’t a review obviously as I am the author, I just wanted to ask anyone that comes by this if they could leave feedback. Literally any feedback is appreciated even short comments. Thanks

Transcend to godhood

Dude it’ cause his sister is called rain

Bro shes blind💀

Buddy what. He’ comforting her? Can you not relate to consolation?

That’s not a ominous thing to say at all

Paradise is more so your end goal whether you get there with aspirations or not

That’s not at all spoiling me. Ya, not at all…