I wonder where the story is as I read in the other link. Think it's already gone. Thankfully still here. This new version is much more interesting by the way. Great.
I come here as the author asks for an honest review. A love story like this is not my thing but I like the author's fantasy novel more, so here I am to support this person. What can I say, I crack a good laugh even in just the first chapter. So yeah...
The idea seems fresh. Love the interaction between the five siblings. It's hilarious, funny, and hectic at the same time. It's not a cringy type of romance. The tension is good.