“Chaotic fantasies, demonic fallacies...”
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It is.
Is there supposed to be a problem here?
He was swept off his feet.
You put a lot of thought into this review, and I appreciate it. So, let me clarify some things if you decide to keep reading. This is my first time writing a mastermind MC, so yes, things are very complex .The book is slow paced, so no info dumps and lengthy character descriptions barely ten chapters into the story. Everything in the summary has happened in the book but, you've not gotten to those parts. Everything confusing has been clarified by the MC in future chapters. Thanks for the review, it shows me how to improve my work.
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No harem
Eve did it good enough to stop his skill from engaging
Because his mind was disturbed