It might be helpful to provide more information on the Other World and how it works. What are the rules and mechanics of the system that allows humans to create MMO-style characters? How does the world function, and what challenges and dangers do adventurers face? Adding more detail to the worldbuilding could help readers immerse themselves in the story.

An enthralling tale that explores the darker side of power and the human spirit. The transformation of Earth's inhabitants and the chaos it brings is a fascinating concept that's executed brilliantly. Jin Tianyi's extraordinary gifts and his journey to find his place in this new world are both inspiring and thought-provoking. The story keeps you on the edge of your seat as you root for Jin and his companions. Highly recommended for readers who enjoy a unique take on LitRPG and modern fantasy