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Without going into spoiler territory I'm going to make the main character go through trials and tribulations as he's exploring this Superhero Universe.

Well that person in question isn't Superman it would be copyright infringement which I'm trying to steer clear from, but it was a realistic take that people would likely catch on quick.

You’re definitely right about that I’ going back to make minor edits to suit the narrative on my previous chapters.

Thank you so much for leaving a review I’l try my best to keep the writing quality the same throughout the story 🙏

Thank you so much for leaving a review it really helps! I hope you enjoy the read if you see any mistakes or notice the story is off track let me know. I‘m open to constructive criticism.

Its not a definite no, but im not sure on my writing capabilities to have a proper harem for the story. if its requested enough I’ll think about it. I hope that’s the answer your looking for.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ A Rip-Roaring Ride of Superheroic Proportions! What's more exhilarating than a roller-coaster ride? A superhero novel I conceived back in 2019, of course! It was like a tiny seed, which I've watered, nourished, and rewritten about, oh, a meager five times. Just your typical authorly dedication, right? Fast-forward to 2023, I've finally mustered enough gusto (and coffee) to lay it all out for the public to feast their eyes upon. And boy, has it been a journey. My humble ’Anything but an Extra’ project took on a life of its own, spiraling into an exciting world of heroes, challenges, and well, more challenges. As I brave through this thrilling expedition, typing away into the wee hours of the night, I hope it brings as much joy to you as it does to me. A hero's journey isn't complete without an audience to cheer them on, after all! Here's to more laughs, gasps, and 'I-did-not-see-that-coming' moments. Buckle up and enjoy the ride!

As the author, I humbly give Bloodborne Legacy 4/5 stars in my own critique. While I recognize areas for improvement, I am proud of the gripping storytelling and the potential it holds. I'm committed to honing my craft and delivering even more captivating narratives in the future. Furthermore, I welcome and value all criticism from readers, as it helps me grow as an author. Your feedback is precious to me, and I listen to it wholeheartedly, eager to create better and more enthralling stories in the future. Thank you for being part of this journey with me.

Why did you include the great way of bhudda in the first place dude? You purposely el nerfed him. May as well included turtle school dbz cultivation instead.