good story with a dystopian type of vibe i also like the main character but i think the pacing of the story is a bit off as in how he gets the overpowered weapons at the start but it also gives him a much needed early advantage so i wont judge to much other than that this story is great and has potentiel

this story is like a fresh breath compared to most isaki novels as in the characters have reactions that are believable and the main character isn't a simp wich is also great and the world building is also a great part of the story and doesn't feel like its just stolen from another novel or anime and the grammer is also good overall i think this story has a lot of potential and i hope you continue it soon

pleas continue this i really like the idea and i feel like it has a lot of potential