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NKGreyInk

NKGreyInk

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An author working on getting their work more attention.

2023-04-10 JoinedGlobal
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  • NKGreyInk
    NKGreyInk1yr
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    Very well developed idea, with pretty believable dialogue, the only issue is on some of the tenses, but other than that it's a fabulous piece of developing fiction.

    Curiosity Killed The Cat
    Horror · Meri_F
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  • NKGreyInk
    NKGreyInk1yr
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    Nice use of imagery throughout so far, your work is very well rounded.

    They did not seem to be able to see her, as if she was watching them in a third-person perspective. The figures were dressed in red robes with hood covering their face, but the flickering light from the fire illuminated their faces, allowing Sasha to catch a glimpse of their lifeless-looking eyes.
    Curiosity Killed The Cat
    Horror · Meri_F
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